First round of illustration revisions arrive

In January, I was treated to the initial sketches (by the titanically talented Ty Templeton) for my upcoming book on Bill Finger, uncredited co-creator, original writer, and visual architect of Batman. I can't show them yet, but I was excited enough to show how they arrived:

Today, I received the first revisions:

Special thanks to my un-bat-able editor, Alyssa Pusey, for taking a break from poring over every last detail (verbal and visual) of this book to create another memorable envelope.

I bet now she's worried that she's set a precedent that I won't easily let slide...